1. I really like how you said the teddy ‘was waiting for love.’ It was a really nice description. 2. You sometimes missed out important words in your sentences. 3. I really enjoyed your description of the teddy, I could picture it in my head.
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1. I really like how you said the teddy ‘was waiting for love.’ It was a really nice description.
2. You sometimes missed out important words in your sentences.
3. I really enjoyed your description of the teddy, I could picture it in my head.