The Teddy By Stefan improved version

Posted on March 1, 2019 by Deleted User
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One Response to The Teddy By Stefan improved version

  1. oaclan says:
    March 5, 2019 at 7:56 pm

    1. The ending is very touching.

    2. Something to improve on: Your punctuation (only 1 full stop )

    3. You need to start sentences with capitals.

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