The little bear by Eloise

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  1. OMayo says:

    I like the scene setting in the first sentence.
    On line 5 and 6 I think You accidentally wrote the same question twice and remember your spaces. Try to proof reed it before publishing it.
    I like the random act of kindness when you put the teddy on the wall so that the owners could find it.
    by Olly

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