I like the way you used the paragraphs and the way you described it as a museum
I think you could have done something about the sweet stand and that would have been even better
You could have maybe ended the paragraphs a little differently because at the moment they all end with exclamation marks!!
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I like the way you used the paragraphs and the way you described it as a museum
I think you could have done something about the sweet stand and that would have been even better
You could have maybe ended the paragraphs a little differently because at the moment they all end with exclamation marks!!