Really nice story Kaya! I like the way you have used ‘crystal lamps’. I really like the style of writing because it’s cool and easy to understand. The only thing I can say is that your sentences are quite long so maybe try and use a couple more commas, But you should be impressed with it.
Really nice story Kaya! I like the way you have used ‘crystal lamps’. I really like the style of writing because it’s cool and easy to understand. The only thing I can say is that your sentences are quite long so maybe try and use a couple more commas, But you should be impressed with it.