Very good Maisie i really liked your story but there are three things that you have to add / improve on:
*Where are you? *How are these strange things happening? *Can you describe more of how it was like and your feelings?
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Very good Maisie i really liked your story but there are three things that you have to add / improve on:
*Where are you?
*How are these strange things happening?
*Can you describe more of how it was like and your feelings?