I really enjoyed reading this blog, and the words you used helped me visualise the story.
You can try and add in some fronted adverbials, noun phrases and some complex sentences next time.
Otherwise, very interesting adjectives, keep it up!
I absolutely love how it ends on a good cliff hanger. A good cliff hanger is were you can kind of guess what can happen next but you still want to read more.
It is so great because I love a happy ending. It reminded me of when I loose my teddy and when i finally find it I am over the moon so I am so happy for Rosie.
Maybe add a few more adjectives for example what’s the teddy like or what does Rosie’s face look like when she finds Cuddles.
I really enjoyed reading this blog, and the words you used helped me visualise the story.
You can try and add in some fronted adverbials, noun phrases and some complex sentences next time.
Otherwise, very interesting adjectives, keep it up!
Lois what a great story!
I absolutely love how it ends on a good cliff hanger. A good cliff hanger is were you can kind of guess what can happen next but you still want to read more.
It is so great because I love a happy ending. It reminded me of when I loose my teddy and when i finally find it I am over the moon so I am so happy for Rosie.
Maybe add a few more adjectives for example what’s the teddy like or what does Rosie’s face look like when she finds Cuddles.