Positive: I liked your use of paragraphs.
Net step: Make sure you’r looking i something has been typed (E.G) Maggie’ should be Maggie’s.
Positive: I liked the cliff-hanger you put in.
That was probably a typo.
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Positive: I liked your use of paragraphs.
Net step: Make sure you’r looking i something has been typed (E.G) Maggie’ should be Maggie’s.
Positive: I liked the cliff-hanger you put in.
That was probably a typo.