I like your description of Uncle Billy. It sounds like he needs a bit of exercise!
I like how you used the phrase ‘looking back, I remember,’ in speech and not in thought.
Why is it unsurprising that Lily asked Uncle Billy about his favourite memory as a child? She could just have easily not asked him, too.
By Alex
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I like your description of Uncle Billy. It sounds like he needs a bit of exercise!
I like how you used the phrase ‘looking back, I remember,’ in speech and not in thought.
Why is it unsurprising that Lily asked Uncle Billy about his favourite memory as a child? She could just have easily not asked him, too.
By Alex