I like the description in he first sentence. It makes the reader hooked into the short story.
I like how it is in the present tense.
❗ In line 3 ‘dominos’ is spelled wrong. It should be ‘dominoes’, with the ‘e’.
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I like the description in he first sentence. It makes the reader hooked into the short story.
I like how it is in the present tense.
❗ In line 3 ‘dominos’ is spelled wrong. It should be ‘dominoes’, with the ‘e’.