Always Be Careful With Dominos by Alex

Posted on June 24, 2019 by Deleted User
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1 Response to Always Be Careful With Dominos by Alex

  1. fhutch says:
    June 24, 2019 at 7:12 pm

    I like the description in he first sentence. It makes the reader hooked into the short story.

    I like how it is in the present tense.

    ❗ In line 3 ‘dominos’ is spelled wrong. It should be ‘dominoes’, with the ‘e’.

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