Hi Ione,
I had goose bumps when I read this, I really enjoyed reading this thrilling piece of work!
Could you be a little more specific about the domino and your house [ the house part in the beginning was a little confusing, I had to read that part a few times so that I could understand it].
Otherwise, I really liked your adjectives, keep this great work up!
Hi Ione,
I had goose bumps when I read this, I really enjoyed reading this thrilling piece of work!
Could you be a little more specific about the domino and your house [ the house part in the beginning was a little confusing, I had to read that part a few times so that I could understand it].
Otherwise, I really liked your adjectives, keep this great work up!