Hi Lois. This is an interesting story, I want to know what happens next! To improve your story I think you could try to use more descriptive sentences describing your setting or surrounding. Otherwise, very mysteriously puzzling!
Capree
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Hi Lois. This is an interesting story, I want to know what happens next!
To improve your story I think you could try to use more descriptive sentences describing your setting or surrounding.
Otherwise, very mysteriously puzzling!
Capree