The Memorable Evening by Lois

Posted on March 27, 2019 by Deleted User
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1 Response to The Memorable Evening by Lois

  1. cchong6 says:
    March 28, 2019 at 4:16 pm

    Hi Lois. This is an interesting story, I want to know what happens next!
    To improve your story I think you could try to use more descriptive sentences describing your setting or surrounding.
    Otherwise, very mysteriously puzzling!

    Capree

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