Not Fair by Sophie

Posted on March 27, 2019 by Deleted User
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1 Response to Not Fair by Sophie

  1. fhutch says:
    April 1, 2019 at 7:08 pm

    I like how you have used a short sentence; ‘It was NOT fair.’

    I like how your sister scribbled on your work.

    ❗ Remember commas for fronted adverbials and spelling.

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