Well done Dylan! Amazing story
I like the plot of the story because it makes you think The description is well used Maybe make the sentences a bit shorter by putting commas or shorten the shorten it
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Well done Dylan! Amazing story
I like the plot of the story because it makes you think
The description is well used
Maybe make the sentences a bit shorter by putting commas or shorten the shorten it
Commented by Raneem