✨: I like how you added a little white mouse in your story because it shows how empty the room was.
✨: I also like how you described how excited his mum was just by saying how her facial expression was like.
:I feel like everything in the story is happening a bit too quick.
✨: I like how you added a little white mouse in your story because it shows how empty the room was.
✨: I also like how you described how excited his mum was just by saying how her facial expression was like.
:I feel like everything in the story is happening a bit too quick.