Well done, Kaya. It’s great!
: The best thing was the description like I was scared, worried but i was petrified to see my parents in the basement drooling red blood, smiles on walls.
: I love the short sentences it really gives effect. The best one probably is I realised it was a curse…
: The next step would be to read it through to check that it has a clear structure.
Well done, Kaya. It’s great!
: The best thing was the description like I was scared, worried but i was petrified to see my parents in the basement drooling red blood, smiles on walls.
: I love the short sentences it really gives effect. The best one probably is I realised it was a curse…
: The next step would be to read it through to check that it has a clear structure.