where is the bag by Lois

Posted on March 8, 2019 by Deleted User
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1 Response to where is the bag by Lois

  1. cchong6 says:
    March 11, 2019 at 6:28 pm

    Really nice story. I liked the exaggeration you used to make it feel like it is real.
    Be careful with your verbs on your nouns that they make sense!

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