I really like your 100 word challenge this week Brendan! I like how you used the word ‘Billabong’ it sounds very Australian. It sounds as if the man in the music shop didn’t know what he was doing with your ‘sister’s’ guitar if he broke it.Maybe you could change the part were it just says end to something a little more interesting? Overall I think your post was very good.
I really like your 100 word challenge this week Brendan! I like how you used the word ‘Billabong’ it sounds very Australian. It sounds as if the man in the music shop didn’t know what he was doing with your ‘sister’s’ guitar if he broke it.Maybe you could change the part were it just says end to something a little more interesting? Overall I think your post was very good.