Good thing: It is really creative, fun and very interesting and I need to find out more like what is going to happen next?!
Need to improve on: Oliver, just remember that your title needs capital letters and don’t forget those spaces after comas and full stops (although well done for remembering some of them!).
Well done Oliver this story is really good
Good thing: It is really creative, fun and very interesting and I need to find out more like what is going to happen next?!
Need to improve on: Oliver, just remember that your title needs capital letters and don’t forget those spaces after comas and full stops (although well done for remembering some of them!).