Cross Country running by Lois

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2 Responses to Cross Country running by Lois

  1. igreen says:

    Lois,
    I don’t really understand it but I still think what you have written is quite good.

  2. stoma says:

    Positive: I like te idea of cross country.

    Net step: I don’t think there should be a but in “but they were exuasted now”.

    Positive: I like how you did difrent fonts.

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