Positive: I like how you made it that you shared your characters feelings in the text.
Positive: I like how you easily set where your character was.
Work on: In future, check your work for any misssing capital letters and full stops and check if it makes sense.
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Positive: I like how you made it that you shared your characters feelings in the text.
Positive: I like how you easily set where your character was.
Work on: In future, check your work for any misssing capital letters and full stops and check if it makes sense.