I like the theme of the story and how you were cycling through the forest and came across a goblin or a troll.
You use descriptive language which makes your story interesting. For example, one cold gloomy night and the mischievous laugh that you said came from goblin or troll.
This is the beginning of a good story. I would like to read the rest of it.
You used dodgy a bit too much. Maybe think of another work that could be used instead.
I like the theme of the story and how you were cycling through the forest and came across a goblin or a troll.
You use descriptive language which makes your story interesting. For example, one cold gloomy night and the mischievous laugh that you said came from goblin or troll.
This is the beginning of a good story. I would like to read the rest of it.
You used dodgy a bit too much. Maybe think of another work that could be used instead.
It sounds like a beginn