I like your story Alfie, particularly your verb ‘sprinted’ and the word ‘adrenaline’. Remember to use a capital I when it is a word on its own and use an apostrophe to show letters are missing= cannot/ can’t. You also need capital letters on proper nouns like St Luke’s.
I like your story Alfie, particularly your verb ‘sprinted’ and the word ‘adrenaline’. Remember to use a capital I when it is a word on its own and use an apostrophe to show letters are missing= cannot/ can’t. You also need capital letters on proper nouns like St Luke’s.