Well done Oliver this is a really good story.
Good thing: It is very interesting and I properly want to read more! You are a very good author! 🙂 ! (:
Need to improve on: You may want to look at your punctuation and remember to put a space after a full stop!
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Well done Oliver this is a really good story.
Good thing: It is very interesting and I properly want to read more! You are a very good author! 🙂 ! (:
Need to improve on: You may want to look at your punctuation and remember to put a space after a full stop!