The Rare Visit by Fredrik

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  1. awatso says:

    I like your description of Uncle Billy. It sounds like he needs a bit of exercise!

    I like how you used the phrase ‘looking back, I remember,’ in speech and not in thought.

    Why is it unsurprising that Lily asked Uncle Billy about his favourite memory as a child? She could just have easily not asked him, too.

    By Alex

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