100wc by Lois

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1 Response to 100wc by Lois

  1. stoma says:

    Positive: I really like the description you put in.

    Negative: Try not to put too much description.

    Positive: I like how you used figurative language.

    Negative: I don’t see how your story is related to the picture.

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