What a fabulous story. I love the happy ending.
I love the creativity of the story and how you used i was so cross that…
You used great description such as: quickly, after school and younger.
The next step might be to go back to commas as you might need one after school and before I.
Other than the next step, a extremely good story.
What a fabulous story. I love the happy ending.
I love the creativity of the story and how you used i was so cross that…
You used great description such as: quickly, after school and younger.
The next step might be to go back to commas as you might need one after school and before I.
Other than the next step, a extremely good story.