Football at the Park by Lois

Posted on March 27, 2019 by Deleted User
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1 Response to Football at the Park by Lois

  1. cchong6 says:
    March 28, 2019 at 4:25 pm

    Hi again Lois. You have put in included of creative writing and imagination.
    Could you describe more about your feelings on how your day was? Or describe more about what is around you?
    Apart from that, I really understood what how your story twists and ends up with a happy ending!

    Capree

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