Positive: I like how you showed a picture.
Next step: Remember your spellings and your punctuation.
Positive: I like how you did a colon instead of a full stop.
I really liked your story because it’s is really funny.You should work on your punctuation a little bit and stop using ‘why’ so many times because it gets boring of you keep on repeating the same word.The picture is really funny too!
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Positive: I like how you showed a picture.
Next step: Remember your spellings and your punctuation.
Positive: I like how you did a colon instead of a full stop.
I really liked your story because it’s is really funny.You should work on your punctuation a little bit and stop using ‘why’ so many times because it gets boring of you keep on repeating the same word.The picture is really funny too!